
While Jane Austen, newly published-author-to-be, wrote to Cassandra about her forthcoming novel in famous maternal, if rather painful or at least debilitating terms—“I am never too busy to think of Sense and Sensibility. I can no more forget it, than a mother can forget her sucking child” (25 April 1811; my italics)—The Jane Austen Society of North America (JASNA) has neglected Sense and Sensibility. The Society’s last Annual General Meeting (AGM) to treat the novel occurred in 1990. And sales statistics indicate that of the six Austen novels, Sense and Sensibility lags far behind the others.1 Karen
Joy Fowler, in her best-selling novel, The
Jane Austen Book Club, involves two of her characters in a discussion of Sense and Sensibility. Granted,
fictional characters are not the best witnesses to support anyone’s
critical case. But what they
say is germane to our concerns. Sylvia insists, “Brandon and Marianne. At
the end, doesn’t it just feel as if Marianne’s been sold? Her mother and
Elinor, both pushing so hard. It
reads as if she fell in love with Brandon, but only after
she married him. He’s been such a good man that her mother and Elinor are
determined he’ll get his reward.” “But that’s my point,” replies
Prudie: “Jane intends you to
feel that uncomfortableness. The
book ends with that marriage and the thing Austen isn’t telling you about
it” (75). Let us concede that
Fowler is making a point through her characters. As an actual professor of living, breathing students, I admit that Sense and Sensibility is the hardest Austen novel for me to teach. This it is not because there are too many Dashwoods in the first few pages: I always hand out a genealogy chart the week before we start to discuss the book to help my students through their Johns and Henrys. Rather, after reading volume one, they are looking for a new male character to appear in London as the hero. By the time we discuss volume three, they are dissatisfied with Elinor’s marriage to Edward and, like Fowler’s fictional discussants, are stunned when they read that Marianne is to be Colonel Brandon’s “reward,” feeling, instead, that he is her reward and wondering if she has truly grown enough to deserve him, despite the narrative assurance that Marianne at nineteen is much improved over Marianne at seventeen (378).2
Such
complaints prompted me to engage in what some Janeites may regard as an act
of heresy: rereading the novel
with a special sensibility about what offends, or at least disturbs, our
sense and sensibilities as readers.
Edward Ferrars obviously
made Emma Thompson uncomfortable when she adapted the novel for her
screenplay. She changed Edward,
who, the novel tells us, “was not recommended to [the Dashwood ladies’]
good opinion by any peculiar graces of person or address,” into the cute
and charmingly insecure Hugh Grant-persona, complete with floppy hair and
stammer (15); we know this screen persona from Four Weddings and Funeral and Two
Weeks’ Notice. (Of course, when Hugh Grant plays the Wickhamesque
Daniel Cleaver in the Bridget Jones
movies, he manifests a very different screen persona. This is called
acting!) To complete Edward’s metamorphosis from charmless to charming,
Thompson saw to it that Hugh Grant actually played the role—the role being
the Hugh Grant-persona rather than the novel’s actual Edward Ferrars. I
need not detail to readers of Persuasions
(because, dear readers, you must be Austen aficionados, whatever the
media) the many witty lines and cute actions that Thompson wrote for Edward
/ Hugh (or Hugh / Edward—the
name order makes no difference in the film) in order to make the character
who causes Elinor Dashwood to suffer acute psychological pain for about 95%
of this novel somewhat palatable and even attractive. Indeed, Thompson’s
interpolated atlas and swordplay antics between Edward and Margaret and the
boyishly witty repartee with which Edward engages Elinor as they walk and
ride together at Norland make it easy to forget that, in the novel, Edward
has no direct speech until,
having been introduced by the narrator in chapter 3 and discussed in the
third person by Elinor and Marianne in chapter 4, he guiltily blurts out in
chapter 5 the word “Devonshire!” after hearing Mrs. Dashwood’s
announcement about moving to Barton (25). Clear
evidence of Emma Thompson’s discomfort with Edward’s deceptive silence
about Lucy appears in yet another new scene that she wrote for the
screenplay. We have Elinor, suddenly as much a lover of horses as Marianne
is of dead leaves, bidding farewell to a favorite horse in the Norland
stables. (Perhaps Thompson did this to emphasize overtly to her
film-viewers that Elinor, too, has sensibility as well as sense.) In
the film, Edward / Hugh, seeking Elinor, hastily enters the barn. The
screenplay reads: “the HORSE breathes between them. Elinor is on fire with
anticipation” (60). Edward begins mid-sentence, saying, hesitatingly, with Hugh’s signature insecure-persona stammer, “—about—about my education”:
ELINOR
(after a beat): Your education? EDWARD:
Yes, It was less . . . successful than it might have been. EDWARD laughs
nervously. ELINOR is completely bewildered. EDWARD:
It was conducted in Plymouth--oddly enough. ELINOR:
Indeed? EDWARD:
Yes. Do you know it? ELINOR:
Plymouth? EDWARD:
Yes. EDWARD:
Oh--well--I spent four years there--at a school run by a--Mr. Pratt-- ELINOR:
Pratt? ELINOR is beginning to feel like a parrot. [Could Thompson
be punning here on Pratt and parrot?] EDWARD:
Precisely--Mr. Pratt--and there, I--that is to say, he has a-- As EDWARD
flounders, a voice cuts through this unexpected foray into his academic past. FANNY [DASHWOOD]: Edward! Edward! (60-61)
Fanny
rushes into the stable and hastily escorts her brother off to the carriage
that is waiting to take him to London. The
stable scene is clearly meant to help exonerate Edward for his secrecy about
his engagement to Lucy even as he is paying attention to Elinor—acting
just as Persuasion’s Captain
Wentworth acts with Louisa Musgrove, giving the impression to everyone that
he is about to be formally engaged to Louisa because he gives her a lot of
time and attention. But no such semi-exculpatory stable scene occurs in the
novel. Rather, Edward’s
sudden disappearance and sustained dishonesty force Elinor to develop a
painful stoicism that inhibits her emotions. But Edward’s dishonesty is not merely a matter of his not having a scene in the novel like the film’s stable scene, where he at least makes an aborted attempt to tell Elinor about his involvement with Lucy. Nor is his dishonesty based solely on his omitting to tell the truth. He actually has a chance early in the novel to be honest with Elinor, but he lies deliberately and facilely. This occurs when Marianne calls his and Elinor’s attention to Edward’s wearing a hitherto unseen “ring with a plait of hair in the centre, very conspicuous on one of his fingers” (98): “‘I never saw you wear a ring before, Edward,’ she cried. ‘Is that Fanny’s hair? I remember her promising to give you some. But I should have thought her hair had been darker.’” Edward “coloured very deeply,” says the narrator, and then gave a “momentary glance at Elinor . . . who had met his eye.” Here is his chance to tell the truth. Instead, he replies, “‘Yes; it is my sister’s hair. The setting always casts a different shade on it you know.’” Edward may color with embarrassment about the hair’s true owner, but he glides right into the lie, even offering embellishing details about the setting’s changing the hair’s shade, to throw Marianne and Elinor off the scent. Right there, Edward is an outright liar. Through
both the voice of the narrator, which we hear a great
deal in this novel,3
and the voice of Elinor, we learn of Elinor’s straining to convince herself
that Edward loves her, not Lucy—such as her “instantaneously” feeling
that “the hair was her own” in the ring scene just cited, before she even
knows of Lucy’s existence. Yet the narrator’s telling us that “Elinor
gloried in [Edward’s] integrity” because he stands by his engagement to
Lucy, despite his mother’s dismissing and disinheriting him, rings false
(270). This is because Elinor, herself, later contradicts her earlier
martyr-like response about glorying in Edward’s integrity.
After hearing the servant, Thomas, describe his encounter with the
newlywed Mr. and Mrs. Ferrars in Exeter, Elinor “now f[inds], that in spite
of herself, she had always admitted a hope, while Edward remained single, that
something would occur to prevent his marrying Lucy; that some resolution of
his own, some mediation of friends, or some more eligible opportunity of
establishment for the lady, would arise to assist the happiness of all”
(357). While Austen uses the “more eligible opportunity for the lady”
option to release Edward from his engagement to Lucy, the emotionally
desperate Elinor is willing to entertain “some resolution of his own” or
“some mediation” by his friends to have her man. The same Elinor who talks
a good game about Edward’s “integrity” is perfectly ready to have him
break his engagement to Lucy. In
fact, Edward would not have been legally responsible for his engagement to
Lucy: he was nineteen—legally underage—when he entered the engagement. By
the Marriage Act of 1753, any contract made by a person under twenty-one,
without parental consent, was void (Stone 92). And
even if the court had considered Edward, by prolonging the engagement to age
23-24, financially independent with his £2,000, his brother, Robert, suggests
outright that his family would have helped him to disengage himself: “‘I
cannot help thinking in short,’ Robert tells Elinor, ‘that means might
have been found’” (300). According
to legal practices of the day, “means” could surely “have been found.” Assuming that Edward’s continuing the engagement into his
majority would have made him liable for breach of promise, he would not have
suffered greatly if Lucy had sought damages. Of course, Mrs. Jennings might
have ostracized him socially for jilting her cousin, but with the likes of
Lady Middleton ready to leave her card with the new Mrs. Willoughby, it is
unlikely that Edward would endure anything more dramatic than short-lived
gossip at Mrs. Jennings’s house—but not at the Middletons’, because Lady
Middleton would always change the topic to the weather. How
did breach of promise suits work? First, because the novel never even implies
that Edward has sexually seduced Lucy, the courts would not have considered
him a rakish villain, deserving severe punishment. As Lawrence Stone explains,
“[A] defendant who had merely broken his word, perhaps under pressure from
parents or friends, was treated much less severely than one who had
impregnated the woman and then repudiated her” (89).
Next, because the novel gives no evidence that Lucy had refused an
offer of marriage from another would-be suitor because of her engagement to
Edward, she could not have claimed that Edward’s breaking their engagement
led to her losing a different opportunity to marry. Finally, had Lucy
succeeded with a breach of promise suit, “[I]n the period 1790 to 1830, for
which the evidence is particularly plentiful, the vast majority of the awards
for damages were between 100 pounds and 500 pounds” (Stone 91)—a small
price for Edward to pay out of his £2,000 to be free of Lucy. Indeed, if
an “ambitious” plaintiff asked for thousands of pounds, the court was
chary of “scheming women”; such suits were usually settled out of court
for much less money (Stone 88, 91). Granted,
Edward confesses later to Elinor that “he had always believed [Lucy] to be a
well-disposed, good-hearted girl, and thoroughly attached to himself” (367).
And he rationalizes his spending “so much time with [the Dashwoods] . . .
when he must have felt his own inconstancy”: “He could only plead an
ignorance of his own heart, and a mistaken confidence in the force of his
engagement” (368). But all of
this adds up to reader discomfort with Edward, as we find ourselves wondering,
“If Edward is so morally upright and sensitive to the feelings of Lucy, then
why is he insensitive towards Elinor, leading her on as he does, even as he
knows he is already engaged? Why not tell her prior to the Lucy/Robert
marriage everything that he tells her after their marriage sets him free? And
how could such a moral Edward lie easily and fluently about the hair ring?”
No wonder my students are looking for another, better man for Elinor! They are
as uncomfortable with Edward’s behavior as Emma Thompson was when she
created the stable scene and turned Edward into Hugh Grant in more ways than
one. It
is, of course, by a Robert ex machina ending
that Elinor and Edward find happiness. But many readers don’t. We think
Elinor deserves better than the Edward she gets; she deserves a man like
Colonel Brandon.
Early
in the novel, Colonel Brandon gets a bad deal not only from Marianne, who sees
Brandon’s imminent demise in his wearing a flannel waistcoat, but also from
the narrator, who tells us readers of his being “silent and grave,” as if
this means he is one step away from a silent grave (38, 34). Many
passages enfeeble and / or age Brandon. For example, the narrator observes that he is “neither very young nor very gay”
(33). Marianne and Margaret deem
him “an absolute old bachelor, for he was on the wrong side of thirty”
(34), while Marianne and Willoughby slight him and are “prejudiced against
him for being neither lively nor young” (50).
Even Charlotte Palmer says that “‘it is quite a pity he should be
so grave and so dull’” (115). Jane
Austen has enervated and aged Colonel Brandon so convincingly that Cheryl
Nixon calls Brandon “elderly” (40). He
is thirty-six in the final chapter of the novel. This is not Mr. Woodhouse on
Viagra™. If the age difference between Brandon and Marianne, at 35 and 17
(369), makes him seem to some readers a “father-figure” to her, what about
the eighteen-year age difference between Jane Fairfax and Mr. Knightley
(Armstrong, 70, 79; Looser, 171-173)?5
In Emma Mrs. Weston
thinks that Jane at age 20 would make a good wife for Mr. Knightley, “a man
about seven or eight-and-thirty” (224-226, 9). And
Emma, who is Jane’s age, marries Mr. Knightley, whose “tall, firm, upright
figure, among the bulky forms and stooping shoulders of the elderly men” at
the Crown Inn Ball arouses Emma’s attention (326): that is not a reaction
towards a man that a twenty-year-old woman considers a father-figure!
Silence and gravity, which imply to some readers and to
Marianne a moribund Colonel Brandon, suggest something quite different when
two of our favorite Austen lovers, Elizabeth and Darcy, display these traits.
In Pride and Prejudice, when Darcy
returns to Longbourn, Elizabeth observes, “‘He looked serious as
usual,’” and after asking her about Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner, he is silent
(335). Rehashing his behavior in the following chapter, Elizabeth asks
herself, “‘Why, if he came only to be silent, grave, and indifferent . . .
did he come at all?’” (339). Six chapters later (3:18), with love on both sides declared and Darcy’s proposal happily accepted, Elizabeth questions Darcy about his quietly serious behavior during his earlier visit, and he replies by querying Elizabeth about her silence and gravity during that same visit:
“What made you so shy of
me? . . . Why . . . did you look as if you did not care about me?” [asks
Elizabeth].
“Because you were grave
and silent, and gave me no encouragement.”
“But I was embarrassed.”
“And so was I.”
“You might have talked to me more when you came to dinner,”
[insists Elizabeth]. “A man who had felt less might.” (381)
Thus,
Elizabeth and Darcy both misinterpret the other’s silence and gravity as
disinterest—another wrong first impression.6 Likewise, in Emma,
as Mr. Knightley begins his proposal to Emma, he says, “‘If I loved you
less, I might be able to talk about it more’” (430).
Silence and gravity, then, are indicators of deep feeling.
Deep feeling has been
haunting Brandon since he first learned of Eliza’s divorce fourteen years
ago on grounds of her criminal conversation (or crim. con., as adultery was
abbreviated in Civil Law), which was widely reported during the era in
question (Stone 231-73, passim).
Marked as sexually depraved and deprived of her income, she was
confined to a “spunging-house” (207). Thus, he is “silent and grave” when the Dashwoods first
meet him. But weighing equally heavily on the Colonel’s mind was his
distress about his missing ward, Eliza Williams, who had suspiciously
disappeared from Bath almost eight months earlier and whose whereabouts and
condition Brandon only learns on the morning when the Barton party was to go
to Whitwell, at which time he springs into action (63). No wonder the man
looked silent and grave as he observed Marianne, the same age as his vanished
ward.7
Recall that the
Colonel’s so-called love-at-first-sight for Marianne was initially announced
by the gossipy Mrs. Jennings, who is “remarkably quick in the discovery of
attachments.” Her imagining love occurs “on the first evening of their
being together, from his listening so attentively while [Marianne] sang to
them” (36). (Later in the novel, Elinor will discount her mother’s
reporting to her that Colonel Brandon “‘has loved [Marianne] . . . ever
since the first moment of seeing her’” [336]: “Here . . . Elinor
perceived,—not the language, not the professions of Colonel Brandon, but the
natural embellishments of her mother’s active fancy, which fashioned every
thing delightful to her, as it chose” [336].)
Back
at the time of Mrs. Jennings’s initial romantic musings at Barton,
“Colonel Brandon alone, of all the party, heard [Marianne play the
pianoforte] without being in raptures. He paid her only the compliment of
attention” (35). But Mrs. Jennings’s ideas were prompted more by her own
wishes than by any real evidence: “Mrs. Jennings had been anxious to see
Colonel Brandon well married, ever since her connection with Sir John first
brought him to her knowledge; and she was always anxious to get a good husband
for every pretty girl” (36).
Shortly
thereafter, when Mrs. Jennings transfers her romantic gossip from Brandon and
Marianne to Willoughby and Marianne, Elinor starts “to believe that the
sentiments which Mrs. Jennings had assigned him for her own satisfaction were
now actually excited by her sister” (49). She witnesses Brandon’s gravity
as he and everyone else see Marianne’s and Willoughby’s openly flirtatious
and thus indecorous behavior (50). Interpreting
Brandon’s reserve as “rather the result of oppression of spirits, than of
any natural gloominess of temper,” Elinor is further influenced by Sir John
Middleton’s having “dropped hints of past injuries and disappointments,”
which have influenced the Colonel’s demeanor (50). Thus, she now both
“pitie[s] and esteem[s]” Brandon not only for being “slighted by
Marianne and Willoughby . . . for being neither lively nor young,” but also
for their “undervalu[ing]” his merits” (50).
So why is the Colonel
“silent and grave,” suffering from “oppressed spirits,” from the first
moment that the Dashwoods meet him at the Middletons’—before Willoughby
even appears in the novel (34)? One
reason that we learn only later in the novel is, as I have already mentioned,
the eight-month-disappearance of his ward, Eliza, who is the same age as
Marianne. This would account for Elinor’s thinking that “his reserve
appeared rather the result of some oppression of spirits than of any natural
gloominess of temper” (50). Had
Brandon’s “gloominess” been repulsive or disturbing, would Elinor have
reached a point where “Colonel Brandon alone, of all her new acquaintance .
. . excite[s] the interest of friendship, or give[s] pleasure as a
companion” (55)? One
paragraph later, watching the others, including Willoughby, dance, Brandon
asks Elinor about Marianne’s disapproval of second attachments. Elinor
replies somewhat pejoratively that her sister’s opinions are “‘all
romantic,’” but that she hopes, “‘A few years will settle her opinions
on the reasonable basis of common sense and observation’” (56).
Colonel Brandon now brings up the late Eliza Brandon—whose shame as a
fallen woman, as we later learn, is the original cause of his gloom—for the
first time: “‘Yet there is something so amiable in the prejudices of a
young mind, that one is sorry to see them give way to the reception of more
general opinions’” (56). Elinor disagrees with him, but the Colonel
persists, “‘When the romantic refinements of a young mind are obliged to
give way, how frequently they are succeeded by such opinions as are but too
common, and too dangerous! I speak from experience. I once knew a lady who in
temper and mind greatly resembled your sister, who thought and judged like
her. . . ’” (56-57). This cryptic reference to the late Eliza, along with Brandon’s distress over his young ward’s seduction and abandonment by Willoughby, which the author hides from us, is important to remember in hindsight when we read that during Marianne’s gloom in London, as she grieves excessively over Willoughby’s absence and his failure to reply to her letters, the Colonel comes to Mrs. Jennings’s house “almost every day . . . to look at Marianne,” to watch her with “earnestness” (168-69). Brandon is neither a stalker nor a voyeur—though without the information about the two Elizas that Austen is holding back, he may appear ghoulishly in love with the late Eliza, whom he sees again in Marianne because of the latter’s attachment to Willoughby, who Brandon now knows is a seducer.8 At
this point in the novel, Marianne is the third young woman Brandon has seen so
struck. Elinor here observes that “his spirits were certainly worse than
when at Barton” (169). While
she attributes Brandon’s increased low spirits since their last encounter at
Barton to his unrequited love for Marianne, she does not yet know (and neither
does the reader) what Brandon knows: his sixteen-year-old ward’s seduction
and desertion by the same Willoughby whom Marianne bemoans. Marianne, then, is
the third young woman he has encountered whose romantic ideals have been
shattered by careless men—and the second young woman whose painful damage
was caused by Willoughby within the past twelve months. Poor
Brandon! No wonder his spirits look “worse” to Elinor.
But if he were still in love with the first Eliza, would he have asked
Elinor at Barton, “‘Are those who have been disappointed in their first
choice, whether from the inconstancy of its object, or the perverseness of
circumstances, to be equally indifferent during the rest of their lives?’”
(56). Brandon obviously supports
the idea that second attachments must be accepted.
As we finally learn from the Colonel’s sharing the Eliza stories with
Elinor, the Colonel is an advocate of “‘the amiable prejudices’” or as
he next calls them, “‘the romantic refinements of a young mind.’” That
is, as a young man, he had believed these same romantic prejudices and
refinements would sustain Eliza’s moral ability to withstand her uncle’s
(the Colonel’s father’s) cruel and selfish pressure to marry the
Colonel’s elder brother so that her fortune could be appropriated to save
the financially ailing Brandon estate.9 He had hoped that
Eliza’s love for him, and her knowledge of his love for her, would enable
her to resist. Instead, the
“‘amiable prejudices of [her] young mind’” failed her:
she succumbed to the unrelenting pressure of her uncle, married his
elder son, and when he committed adultery, so did she. As Colonel Brandon
states, “‘[W]ith such a husband to provoke inconstancy, and without a
friend to advise or restrain her,’” she became a fallen woman and the
shameful object of divorce (206). This,
he continues, is when his “gloom” descended: “‘The shock which her
marriage had given me . . . was of a trifling weight—was nothing—to what I
felt when I heard . . . of her
divorce. It was that which
threw this gloom--....’” (206, Austen’s italics).
(Add to that “gloom” what he will soon reveal about Eliza
Williams’s problems!) The grounds for divorce were legally based on the
wife’s adultery (but not a husband’s adultery), and her shame was public. Painfully
cognizant of both the Willoughby / Eliza Williams situation and Marianne’s
very public “gloom” after Willoughby first inexplicably ignored and then
deserted her for Miss Grey, the Colonel is quick to assure Elinor, “‘Your
sister, I hope, cannot be offended . . .
by the resemblance I have fancied between her and my poor disgraced
relation. Their fates, their fortunes cannot be the same; and had the natural
sweet disposition of the one been guarded by a firmer mind, or an happier
marriage, she might have been all that you will live to see the other be’”
(208). Having had her “‘romantic refinements’” crushed by Willoughby’s callous treatment, Marianne now experiences her own gloom when Elinor tells her the Eliza stories. Indeed, she becomes like Brandon, and her “gloom” descends for the same reason as Brandon’s did about the elder Eliza when she learns of Willoughby’s treatment of the younger Eliza:
[Marianne’s] mind did
become settled, but
it was settled in a gloomy
dejection. She felt the
loss of Willoughby’s
character [i.e., “the romantic
refinements of a young
mind”] yet more heavily
than she had felt the loss
of his heart; his seduction
and desertion of Miss
Williams, the misery of that
poor girl, and the doubt
of what his designs might
once
have been on herself, preyed altogether so
so much on her spirits,
that she could not bring
herself to speak of what
she felt even to Elinor;
and [she] brood]ed] over
her sorrows in silence. . . . (Austen italicizes once; other italics are mine, 212)
Thus,
Marianne and Brandon, suffering similar romantic disillusionments, react in
the same way: with gloomy silence. What a pair! While
Marianne does not fall morally in the way of the two Elizas, she suffers in a
way that impairs her ability to function. This
is not just a matter of a teenager crying in her room over a boyfriend’s
jilt for a few days; rather, her suffering is prolonged and serious. In
modern terms, she falls into a situational depression and near fatal illness.10
Neither sleeping nor eating and weeping inconsolable tears, she displays loss of energy and fatigue, is overwhelmed by sadness and grief, and suffers from headaches:
Elinor . . . found . . . [Marianne]
faint and giddy from a long want of
proper rest and food; for it was many days since she had any appetite, and
many nights since she had really slept; and now, when her mind was no
longer supported by the fever of suspense, the consequence of all this was
an aching head, a weakened stomach, and a general nervous faintness. (185)
Even
John Dashwood notices Marianne’s dramatic physical deterioration since he
last saw her, months ago at Norland: “‘But my dear Elinor, what is the
matter with Marianne?—she looks very unwell, has lost her colour, and is
grown quite thin. Is she ill?’” (227). Her extended period of misery over
Willoughby is, of course, unknown to him. Also
in line with the symptoms of depression, Marianne loses interest and pleasure
in everyday activities, and she even manifests feelings of inappropriate guilt
as she tells Elinor that “‘nothing but the blackest art employed against
me can have’” changed Willoughby’s feelings about her (188-89).
So is it any surprise that Marianne falls severely ill at Cleveland?
Jane Austen attributes this to Marianne’s carelessly failing to change her
wet stockings and shoes after walking in the long, wet grass.
But modern medicine would diagnose that Marianne’s situational
depression led to her having a depressed immune system, making her vulnerable
to the very “‘infection’”
that the Palmers’ apothecary mentions (307).
Brandon, then, has
witnessed the troubling and dangerous transformations of both Eliza Brandon
and Marianne from the lovely and innocent young women they were before the
“‘amiable impressions of [their] young mind[s]’” were crushed by
others’ cruelties—cruelties grounded, as we learn, in each man’s selfish
desire for money. He was also
discerning enough to see the similarities and differences between the two of
them. As a gentleman of real
feeling, he was and is seriously concerned about both of them.
But the gratuitous narrative comment that calls Marianne
Brandon’s “reward” in marriage (378)—turning Marianne into a trophy
wife—does little to help readers discern Colonel Brandon’s true character.
It is as if in hastening to conclude the novel, the narrator neglected all
that she had earlier told us of the Colonel or had let the Colonel tell us of
himself. Furthermore, the narrator needlessly adds to reader discomfort about
the Marianne / Brandon marriage by trying to reassure us that “Marianne
could never love by halves; and her whole heart became, in time, as much
devoted to her husband, as it had once been devoted to Willoughby” (379). It
is as if the narrator is doing her best to assuage our doubts. The
Colonel, himself, has felt and suffered from the meanness of a father and
brother who separated him from the woman he loved. And even after that woman,
Eliza, fell into disgrace, he came to her aid and cared for her illegitimate
child, as well as that child’s illegitimate child. He is the hero of
sensibility whom Marianne idealized. Whether she can really mature enough to
value him requires us readers to exercise our Coleridgean “willing
suspension of disbelief . . . which constitutes poetic faith” (388). But
satisfying our sense is another story. Willoughby,
on the other hand, is an actor of sensibility: he confesses as much to the
emotionally bedraggled Elinor in that very showy scene at Cleveland: “‘I
endeavoured, by every means in my power, to make myself pleasing to
[Marianne], without any design of returning her affection’” (320). And he
excuses himself by saying he was “‘a blockhead . . . [and] a rascal’”
(319). A
sociopath is more like it.11
Willoughby exhibits
most of the abnormal personality disorder traits associated with sociopathy. Superficially
charming, sociopaths tend to be outgoing, glib, even charming—all of which
Willoughby is (just ask the Dashwood ladies when they meet him!). They exhibit
selfish and unemotional sexual behavior (recall his cavalier attitude about
the pregnant Eliza Williams: “‘common sense might have told her how to
find it [his direction, address] out’” after learning she was pregnant
[323]) and irresponsibility, even towards their children.
Willoughby never mentions an intention to provide support for Eliza and
their child. Sociopaths are keenly sensitive to their own pain:
“‘Thunderbolts and daggers!’” he claims assailed his heart when he
read Marianne’s letters (325). But
they are also selfish and lack empathy. Stating
that Marianne “‘was dearer to me than any other woman in the world,’”
Willoughby then says, “‘But everything was just then settled between Miss
Grey and me’” (326); he later notes matter-of-factly and without a hint of
apology, Miss Grey’s “‘money was necessary to me’” (328). A
parasitic lifestyle is another sociopathic trait. Sociopaths
seek attention by claiming themselves to be victims: recall Willoughby’s
ridiculing his erstwhile benefactor, Mrs. Smith at Allenham, for being
puritanical: “‘The purity of
her life, the formality of her notions, her ignorance of the
world—everything was against me. . . . In the height of her morality, good
woman! She offered to forgive the past if I would marry Eliza. That could not
be— . . . ’” (323). He even blames his wife, Sophia Grey, “‘She
does not deserve your compassion,’” and then morbidly suggests with
psychopathic consciencelessness, “‘Were I even by any blessed chance at
liberty again—’” (329, 332). Could
any statement better represent the antisocial, even psychopathic
characteristic of “completely lacking in conscience and feelings for
others” (Hare xi)? Sociopaths
desire self-gratification through self-pity: Willoughby directly asks Elinor
for pity three times in this scene (327, 329), and throughout his narration,
he presents himself as a victim of others. Exhibiting
a typically sociopathic sense of pompous self-worth, Willoughby enters
Cleveland, fascinated with the thought that the dying Marianne’s last
thoughts are of him (sociopaths are totally egocentric), and that he can
behold her face, with the same “‘look and hue’” of death that he saw
in her face at the party when he rejected her (327). Sociopaths are
manipulative and conning. Case
histories validate behavior such as Elinor’s feeling sorry for and losing
sleep over Willoughby (325, 332, 333). Thus,
while the narrator tells us that we need not doubt that Willoughby’s
“repentance of misconduct . . .
was sincere” (379), it is hard for some of us to reconcile the narrative
assurance with what we have just seen and heard Willoughby display at
Cleveland. Emma Thompson, then, had a good reason to omit Willoughby’s
Cleveland scene from her screenplay. Why,
then, are we uncomfortable with Sense
and Sensibility? We have a hero, Colonel Brandon, whose strength and
sensibility are undermined by the other characters and the narrator, herself.
We have a pseudo-hero, Edward Ferrars, who is a liar. We have one heroine,
Elinor, through whose eyes most of the novel is rendered, suffering a
prolonged and deep anxiety and anguish because of the pseudo-hero. We have
another heroine, Marianne, going from near-fatal situational depression at
seventeen to maturity at nineteen because the narrator unconvincingly tells us
so. Furthermore, she experiences similar gloomy silence over Willoughby’s
treatment of Eliza Junior as Brandon experienced for Eliza Senior and for the
same reasons, and she is called the “reward” for the heroic Brandon, who
in many ways seems to be the trophy husband, instead. Finally, we have
Willoughby’s displaying a disturbingly sociopathic personality, even as
Marianne and Elinor end up forgiving him, which is, of course, precisely what
the victims of sociopaths and psychopaths do. The
brilliance of this novel is that the young Jane Austen was able to create
psychologically provocative characters, who evoke as many strong and
conflicting feelings among her readers as actual persons do in our lives.
And she managed to accomplish this without ever having taken Psychology
101. Notes
1.
My survey of the albeit sometimes questionable sales rankings at
www.amazon.com for Mass Market
Paperback editions (usually, the cheapest editions) of Austen’s six novels
revealed that Sense and Sensibility
trailed behind the other five novels by over 600,000 copies sold: S&S’s sales rank
was #704,604; P&P’s #814; MP’s
#44,705; E’s #3,298; and even NA’s
#39,101. I went to Mass Market
because I felt these would not be
the editions assigned by faculty to their students, who were buying editions
on professorial orders. When the
1999 AGM took an admittedly “not-so-scientific poll” among attendees,
asking them to name their favorite Austen novel, Sense
and Sensibility came in last, earning a measly four votes of the 280 cast
(JASNA News, 15 [winter 1999], 7).
I asked John Parker (JASNA-Vancouver), a longtime thoughtful Austen
reader, why he thought this book was viewed so unfavorably, he said, “I am
never comfortable when I finish Sense and Sensibility.” He
made this comment several years prior to the publication of Fowler’s novel,
discussed in the paper’s next paragraph. 2.
Interestingly, Lindsay Doran, the producer of the 1995-film version of Sense and Sensibility,
commented on Oct. 9, at the 2004-AGM during a panel discussion of Austen
inspired films, “The question whether Marianne Dashwood matures enough to
deserve Colonel Brandon or merely settles for Colonel Brandon still bothers
readers of Sense
and Sensibility.” Thanks to Marsha Huff for corroborating my hurried
transcription of her comment (e-mail, Oct. 17, 2004). 3.
Likewise, Claudia Johnson observes, “Sense
and Sensibilty seems to give us exceptionally generous access to authorial
voice” (xi). 4.
Given the topic of engagements, broken and kept, it is interesting to
remember that Jane Austen not only recanted her acceptance of
Harris Bigg-Wither’s marriage proposal, but also advised her niece,
Fanny Knight, who was “nearly engaged” to John Plumptre and then ended the
relationship, “It is no creed of mine, as you must be well aware, that such
sort of Disappointments kill anybody” (A
Family Record, 121-122 and JA to FK, 20 Nov. 1814, #109 in DLF Letters).
That the Austens were no
strangers to broken engagements is also seen in Henry Austen’s experiences. A
Family Record states that Mary Pearson “broke off her engagement to
Henry” (91); however, Jon Spence suggests that Henry, in love with Eliza De
Feuillide, “somehow managed to extricate himself from his engagement to Mary
Pearson, and there was no open scandal as a result of the break” (107).
Henry soon thereafter married Eliza. Thanks to Sheila Quigley, Esq., who
referred me to historical case law regarding engagements in Austen’s day.
For an alternative view of Edward Ferrars, see “In Defence [sic]
of Edward Ferrars” at http://www.jasa.net.au/efdefence.html. 5.
Tanner (72, 100), Ruoff (68), and D. Kaplan (208-09, 214) see Brandon
as boring and unromantic; on a similar note, James-Cavan considers him
unlikely to have an interesting story (26). 6.
I first developed this concept in “Austen’s Sense
and Sensibility,” The Explicator
60 (Fall 2001), 15-19. 7.
Lawrence Stone observes, “By the mid-eighteenth-century . . . the
breach of promise action was firmly established in common law, and was filling
an urgent need”—the “need to discourage males from seducing young women
on promises of marriage and then abandoning them when they became pregnant”
(87, 89). This suggests that Brandon’s deep worry over his ward’s
disappearance realistically reflects a serious concern of the period regarding
the dangers posed to the virtue of young women. 8.
At the May 7, 2005 Gala hosted by JASNA-Greater Chicago Region, Margaret Ann
Doody went so far as to interpret Brandon’s behavior at Mrs. Jennings’s
house as ghoulish, “There is a whiff of the vampire about Colonel Brandon,
to whom Marianne’s greatest charm is her resemblance to his father’s
ward.” Thanks to attendee
Marsha Huff for e-mailing me this information (5/8/05). Similarly, JASNA-Calgary,
Alberta’s Spring Gala on June 8, 2002, featured a panel discussion of Jane
Austen’s heroes, followed by audience participation, where Professor Juliet
MacMaster claimed that “Brandon is in love with a dead girl.” 9.
I arrived at this reading independently from Isobel Armstrong’s
discussion of the same passage (78), which was kindly pointed out to me by
Marcia Folsom. My development,
however, goes beyond Armstrong’s. 10.
My discussion of the symptoms of depression is taken from the DSM-IV-TR.
Using a medical dictionary from the mid-eighteenth-century, as well as Mary
Wollstonecraft’s Vindication of the
Rights of Woman (1792), Armstrong (n. 9) deals with Marianne’s behavior
in terms of hysteria and hyper-sensibility’s connection to sexuality. Thanks
to Cheryl Kinney, M.D., for reading my interpretation and acknowledging that
it makes medical sense, as well as to the Psychology and Nursing majors in
fall 2004’s ENGL 498: Senior Seminar on Jane Austen, the University of
Colorado, Colorado Springs, for assistance with the diagnosis. 11.
My discussion of the symptoms of sociopathy and antisocial personality
disorder is taken from DSM-IV-TR and
Stout. Thanks to Sarah
Qualls, Ph.D, Professor of Psychology at my campus, for discussing with me
anti-social personality disorders and the differences between psychopaths and
sociopaths.
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